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Title: Familiar's companion from maus Post by: deda on June 10, 2007, 05:25:42 am Awake from his long sleep and raise from the coffin now she seek someone who can bring a fresh blood.
1. it is SHE; 2. awakened; 3. raised; 4. seeks; 5. no article before fresh blood or maybe -some-. p.s. I think i deserved karma + for this one.... 8) Title: Re: Familiar's companion from maus Post by: Matthew on June 10, 2007, 07:29:39 am How about,
Awakened from her long slumber and risen from her coffin, she waits for the fresh blood of those foolish enough to come. Title: Re: Familiar's companion from maus Post by: Sirrion on August 22, 2007, 12:20:24 pm FNR, +karma both )
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