(Red Aura) A mighty minotaur brandishing his mace here.
Blood mats this minotaurs thick fur causing it to turn dark
red. His horn has a small chip missing from one side with and
unfortunate battle with a flaming sword. Being for hire he is
travelling to Thorbardin because he's heard that there is possibly
work there for him.
A minotaur mercenary is in perfect condition.
A minotaur mercenary is using:
<worn around neck> a tattered green cloak
<worn on feet> a pair of red silken boots
<worn on arms> a pair of spiked iron armplates
<wielded> (Red Aura) (Glowing) the emerald hilted blade
1) Should rather be "... brandishing his blade is here" instead of "brandishing his mace here"
2) The description is off. Should probably be something like this:
Blood mats this minotaur’s thick fur, turning it dark red. One horn bears a small chip from an unfortunate battle with a flaming sword. A sellsword by trade, he is traveling to Thorbardin after hearing there may be work there.