Barbarian village

[Rael]

This is the barbarian kind, leader of the Tribe of the Elk. All his
life being spend in the fight for the freedom for his people among
the other inhabitants of the frozen wastelands of the north. His
face bearing scars of the veteran, armor seen throusands of the
furious battles, he is indeed is not an easy spot to beat.
The Barbarian King is in perfect condition.

The Barbarian King is using:
<wielded>           a dual-bladed axe set with a spike

king

spent

thousands

there should be no 'is'

[Rael]

This man is tall and strong like a warrior. However, he is wielding a
wooden staff. There is an amulet aroung his neck with a strange symbol. This
is a symbol of a red dragon on black ground, like banners in the village.
These people hate this red dragon, the symbols of the red dragon have not
meaning that they respect, idolize the red dragon. They believe these
symbols are the protective shields against his power. This man is a shaman
of his tribe. The symbols are runed and writed on the places by him. There
are no many shamans in the village.
A barbarian shaman is in perfect condition.

A barbarian shaman is using:
<wielded>           a club set with iron spikes

He is wielding a club, not a staff.

around

few

[Rael]

Icingdeath, the white dragon of the north, is a huge monster.
She is unbreakable and unbeaten one. Massive white scales covering
body of the monster as the perfect natural shield given to the beast
by it's magical nature. Massive horns vibrating softly, large wings
on her back lifted through the spine, covering it from the
unpredictable blows. This magnificient beast inhabit this tundra
for the throusand ages, and it seem to be very difficult to beat it
without being a warrior of great skills.
A huge white dragon called Icingdeath has a few scratches.

A huge white dragon called Icingdeath is using:
<worn on torso>     (Red Aura) massive chest scale of white dragon

red
thousand
seems
red
red

[Rael]

This is winter wolf, one of the most viscious predators of the
tundra, prowling through the wasteland for the prey. His red
eyes growing in the night spreading nightmarish tales among
the barbarian tribes.
A winter wolf is in perfect condition.

vicious
glowing

[Rael]

You are gazing upon the specter of the massive huge man. Onbce being
barbarian king and serve to his tribe, being slain in the battle and
now still serving to the tribe, even in afterlife. Two green dots
beneath his rusted iron helm looking at you without interrest, even
without any feeling, sending a strange chill down through your spine.
The spirit of ancient barbarian king is in perfect condition.

The spirit of ancient barbarian king is using:
<worn on body>      a royal-looking burial shroud

Once
serving
interest

[Rael]

This man is tall and strong. His hair is long and strange shape. He is
walking fast. He is not wearing any armor. There is not a weapon in his
hands. But his arms are strong. There are some furs and animal skins on him
as clothes.
A barbarian villager is in perfect condition.

strangely shaped
no

[Rael]

The Barbarian Village
  This place seems like a small tribe, small town. The land is the same as
tundras. There is no cover on it. Everything is natural, there is nothing to
disturb eye. There are small huts, strong tents on the land. On the south
east there is a huge stone building with strange symbols. The black banners
with red dragon figure are placed at many sides. It doesnt seem any shop or
bazaar in the village. The small paths randomly goes into the depth of
village. There is no many people on the paths. These ones are far away from
here. Some dogs and horses stands near the huts. There is a square that
connects the small paths on the south side.

[Exits: north east south west]

ground
To
exists in
go
There aren't
stand

[Rael]

In the royal chambers of the Elk tribe
  You are find yourself in the royal barbarian chambers, set incredibly
rich for the people of tundra. Skins of the animals drapping wals of
the stone cavern, creating a confortable resting place for it's owner.
Massive weapons chained to the walls, weapons of many trousand battles.
Some of them seems to be unused, some nearly shattered into useless piles
of iron chunks. This is the chamber of the barbarian leader, and their
king of the tribe.

drape walls
comfortable
thousands of

[Rael]

In the frozen mountains
  These mountains are natural borders of this tundra that separate it from
other worlds. These are so high, so sharp and dangerous for travelers. There
are only sharp rocks and hard soil on the ground. The air is freezing. The
wind is coming like a sharp dagger to faces. It is to hard to pass over
these mountains. There is a small, frozen path to go to top of the
mountains. It comes from the village on the north. There are few plants,
animals to see. The path had been pressed by a huge mass of something. There
are some frozen signs on the cold, hard ground.

too

[Rael]

Inside the cavern of the Icingdeath
  This place is a huge cave where is a home for its deadly owner. Ancient red
dragon lives in this huge cave. This dragon who defeat the
many thousands of mighty warriors, had been accepted an horrible, evil god,
by the barbarian tribe. Barbarians give him a virgin as a sacrifice to
feed his anger and hunger. There is a huge treasure, gold coins, diamonds,
gems, weapons and armors on the ground, with many bones.

[Exits: west]
(Translucent) (Red Aura) (White Aura) A huge white dragon called Icingdeath is here, fighting YOU!

which
defeated
as a
virgins
red (Icingdeath has to be a RED dragon according to room descriptions)

[Critic]

rael, you'r kewl ))

[deda]

Man, how many cons you spent to investigate all those spelling mistakes? 

[Rael]

I've spent nothing but half of a hour.

[Nuitari]

Thanks for this Fixed. All roomdescs changed to reflect Icingdeath's whiteness.
This area should really be rewritten from ground up for its crappy descs, but alas, i'm no builder.