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« on: October 05, 2005, 03:10:32 pm »

Failed attempt to raise a mummy or a zombie:

You fail and destroy the corpse of the merman guard

without a trailing dot.

Animate dead cooldown message:

You feel your power over the dead return.

May the native English speakers correct me if I am wrong, but I feel something bad about this phrase. Should be 'returns' or possibly 'returning', not sure about it. Or 'return' is a noun here?

Mummify cooldown message is even worse:

You feel you power over the dead return.



Another funny thing is that when a skeleton or golem dies, the ordinary corpse is created. The result is

Your group:
[ 3 Mob] The skeleton of the skeleton of the skeleton of an iron golem
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« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2005, 04:15:10 pm »

I'm sorta sleepy, but I'm reasonably sure it's alright to say
"You feel your power over the dead return."
and be gramatically correct.
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Kingdoms are forged by war...


« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2005, 05:07:37 pm »

Right you are lad. Right you are.
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« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2005, 06:17:04 am »

I have an A in Pre-College Comp...sounds good to me  Cheesy
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« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2005, 09:30:31 am »

Failed animate skeleton spell:

You fail and destroy the skeleton of an aurburn haired mermaid

without a dot too.
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Kingdoms are forged by war...


« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2005, 09:31:47 am »

gramatically correct other than the error in punctuation
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« Reply #6 on: October 13, 2005, 05:51:27 pm »

Fixed.
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